Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has their own travel preferences and we should chose the way which suites our liking and by which we enjoy the most. Personally, I believe it is best to travel alone and explore the places. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore further.
To begin with, many people don’t like dependency on others to explore different places. If you are in group you have to take care of likes and dislikes of other group members, and as a result, you miss the enjoyment which have otherwise achieved if you would have traveled alone. Further, while travelling alone we can look out places which we like the most and can vary our schedule as per our preferences. For instance, my sister recently went to Thailand with group of her friends. After, she is back from her trip, she revealed that it would have been better if she would have traveled alone. Her group has two other girls, who took a lot of time in dressing up every day which resulted in them being late for the locations which they plan to visit each day. This states that if my sister would not have dependency on her other group members, she would have reached out to each locations on time and would have enjoyed better.
Secondly, travelling alone helps me to explore places within my budget without over-spending on unimportant things. While alone, I can stay in a hostel and share my room with other travelers. Moreover, in place on eating in a five star hotel, I can have my meals at a local joint and enjoy authentic cuisines of that particular tourist place. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Four years ago, I was planning to have a trip to Europe, but I was concerned about the expenses which will incur if I plan to go with a group of people accompanied by a tour guide. One of my friend suggested that I should try travelling alone so with that I can manage my trip as per my preferences and can control my expenses. I tried the same and booked my whole trip and tickets all by myself and I feel that I took the right decision as I was able to save much of the money which I can use in my next adventures. This depicts that if I would not have planned to travel alone, I would have spent alone in hands of a travel guide.
Thirdly, by travelling alone you learn to become more independent and organized. As, you will be deciding everything about your trip, so you learn to be responsible, and will know how to act in a specific situation. With this you grow much better in your life and lead a more enjoyable life. Further, you gain a lot of confidence which you will not get while travelling in group because there are other people in your group who might be taking decisions for you and you will just be following them.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should travel individually to look for places. This is because you don’t have dependency on other members to enjoy your trip, you can have your trip as per your preferences which can suit your budget, and because you learn to be more independent and organized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: had traveled
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Suggestion: had traveled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 9.8082437276 275% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2498.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4686940966 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46356964705 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431127012522 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1670811689 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2916666667 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187695572966 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605280335564 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426377263846 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11722331975 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406866992548 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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