Write about the following topic:
Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than
conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Organic foods are expensive and there is no denial in that, the rationale behind there over pricing is the time and the efforts that incurred in farming. whereas conventionally cultivated food is in sync with general pricing and people can afford them easily. In my opinion the extra costs charge for organic food is completely justified as they are completely natural and far superior in quality compared to inorganically farmed food.
Pesticide and chemical fertilizer came in use to preserve corps from warms and increase the production. over the period of time growing demand of food and greed of food producers results in to, excessive use of pesticide and chemical based spray in farming. Thus, we have enough food in our stores but how much healthy it is, is a question in itself. There are several diseases diagnosed which are caused by consumption of such food.
At the other hand organic farming involves uses of natural fertilizers like cattle waste and river soils. such type of farming takes lot of time and their production is quite low as compare to conventionally farmed farms. Hence, these foods always list with higher prices but they are healthy and upmost in quality. for example, a farmer who is relied on naturally processed fertilizer have to wait for entire season to get its crop cultivated and he has to preserve it from worms and birds without using pesticide and less production of food leads him to charge extra than others.
In my conclusion, it is not possible to shift whole farming to organic methods because our food demand is higher. but when it comes to eat natural and healthy, people should ready to pay some extra bucks for organic food. However, paying extra impacts on budget but it promises the worth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...d the efforts that incurred in farming. whereas conventionally cultivated food is in sy...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...sticide and chemical fertilizer came in use to preserve corps from warms and increa...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
...from warms and increase the production. over the period of time growing demand of fo...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s and increase the production. over the period of time growing demand of food and greed of foo...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...zers like cattle waste and river soils. such type of farming takes lot of time and t...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'takes'' or 'take's'?
Suggestion: takes'; take's
...e and river soils. such type of farming takes lot of time and their production is qui...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...they are healthy and upmost in quality. for example, a farmer who is relied on natu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...hods because our food demand is higher. but when it comes to eat natural and health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51062429763 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.580461345 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860773155481 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323835966385 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315560494149 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592578532366 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301700398807 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.