under british and australia laws a jury in a criminals case has no access information about the defendant's past criminal record. do you agree or disagree
i believe that it is not true or false to consider the defendant' past criminal record in the present' sentence. a nation should choose which option is the most appropriate. personally, i suppose that combination between the past's sentence with guilty activities in the present to take the final decision is the most suitable.
firstly, in the past a person who had a bad behaviour a get an official sentence, and now continue to do those illegal things such as: stealing, murdering, or so forth. that illustrates that person have not regretted in their behaviors and wanted to be a good citizen. so, a more serious sentence is more appropriate. and it can be seemed to be a threatening or warming to that criminal. also, it show that laws which is strict to people who is naughty and disobedient, and generous, tolerant to people who are aware of their own illegal activities and able to improve their personality.
secondly, taking a decision based on the previous events will be equal to the first time-guilty-citizens. a person who is the first time to practice a illegal activity, while, those who are the second or third time to repeat this activity . both of them receive the same sentence. so, is it still appropriate? that will result to argument, opposed opinions, anger of both criminals' family and public.
conclusion, laws and making-law-person can not be perfect and equal to everyone in any perspective. so, the best way to protect yourself from the disadvantageous or imperfect point in laws is not to be guilty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, third, while, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89230769231 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0733319491 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5996661886 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958855210201 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315050215216 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529288473119 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614932402287 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360724224105 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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