Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems, Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there are plenty of considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in their future plan about where to live after graduation. People may pursue a more stable situation and stay in the same city, others probably would like to switch to different regions as a challenge for themselves. which one is better? The definition of better choice is very subjective and relative and dependent on what kind of aspect. In my humble opinion, in terms of personal capability development, if somebody completes his bachelor degree as an example, I would recommend he or she should move toward a different place and embracing higher level education or more career opportunities.
Challenging makes us grow as well as be independent. In any aspects, change living place is beneficial, even though it's more comfortable for those to stay in the hometown after graduation. challenges comes from having to adapt ourselves to a new environment. Anything is all new to us, through facing an unfamiliar environment forces us to grow in psychological strength. For instance, we get to deal with stuffs such as house renting, career, social network exploring and so forth. None of these is easy to do and we have to complete without others' help in most of time. In a long time run because we have much stronger adaption, it makes us less vulnerable to rapid environment changes which always happen today.
Additionally, a hometown usually offers fewer jobs or career opportunities. For example, my home city is a relatively small, in southern Taiwan, is famous for its tourism. Conspicuously, there is not adequate jobs for technology that I'm proficient in. most of them are service and hotel related industries. In my case, it really forces me to move to another city offering it jobs as well as higher salaries.
In conclusion, in terms of personal capability growth, locating in another city or town apparently not only provides more career chances, but also benefits an ability to be independent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
there are plenty of considerations or factors...
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Suggestion: Which
... regions as a challenge for themselves. which one is better? The definition of better...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Challenges
... stay in the hometown after graduation. challenges comes from having to adapt ourselves to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s not adequate jobs for technology that Im proficient in. most of them are service...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, may, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06686930091 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97185175999 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632218844985 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.013159326 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138278156617 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375056545007 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320049465197 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709927851221 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034573291293 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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