Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain:
What are the changes? What are the problems you are facing? What part of the service would you like to change?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to acknowledge you about the issues we are facing due to a modification in our local bus service. Two weeks ago, the council has extended the route of the bus E452 along with many others. Unfortunately, the new update in routes has resulted in the delay of bus arrival at my local bus stop as well as at the station. Due to the mentioned detour, I am having trouble reaching office on time.
The bus is always arriving 15-20 minutes late than usual as it stops at several more stops than before and does the same on the way to the station too. This is causing me a delay in reaching office every day by half an hour. In a big picture, this is impacting my professional status among my colleagues as well as my leaders.
Hence, I request you to put a word about this issue in the forthcoming council meeting as it is affecting many other citizens and their schedule too. A schedule of earlier bus hours will be honoured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39106145251 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48482174974 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8694213203 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134902039401 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547475924929 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607085542851 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877745667592 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697290377635 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.