As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is an growing demand for more flights
What problems does this have on the environment?
What measures could be taken to solve the problem?
Travelling nowadays has become one of the most popular activities in many country since the introduce of cheap air flight companies. It could be seen that the influx number of tourists that willing to use commercial airline as main transportation to host country is significant. This essay will look further into an explanation how this phenomenon could impact to the environment, following by reasonable solutions in the next paragraph.
As the number of commercial air flights has surge rapidly due to tourism expansion, the massive volume of toxic substances, which is released to the atmosphere as exhaust gas, has become a major threat to our eco-system. Combined with other emissions, the destructive phenomenon namely as greenhouse gas could make our environment more vulnerable to be damaged in the future.
There are many solutions that could be done to protect the environment from overuse of airplane as common transportation. For example, the government could add more tax to the industry, which will put the air ticket price less attractive to tourists. Since the total cost plus tax are not cheap like before, individuals would re-consider another type of transport, such as train or bus. At the result, this practice would lower the amount of exhaust fumes released into the sky.
In conclusion, it is worth to consider that every air flight, although could bring economic benefits to the industry but also contain a threat to our surrounding habitats. Therefore, it is crucial for people to think seriously about what vehicle they would take for their trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...opular activities in many country since the introduce of cheap air flight companies. It could...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'surged'.
Suggestion: surged
...he number of commercial air flights has surge rapidly due to tourism expansion, the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20784313725 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86863214185 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.152041434 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179615873811 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628776708665 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385974500667 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100050791181 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00673690081576 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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