Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain an important source of new for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, following the development of advanced technology, online news is become broader and broader, as a result, it is the rise of people who prefer using the internet to find information. There are several reasons for the maintenance of a coarse newspaper.
On one hand, the existence of printed newspapers is longer than the electronic ones so that the affected range of traditional newspapers is wider. Besides, not everyone has access or want to use the Internet such as elderly people, rural area, developing country,... For example, in Vietnam, especially in the war, there was no internet and this is the reason why the newspaper was the most popular way to access knowledge. One more the advantages of traditional newspapers is the quality, we can completely say that newspapers are worth paying for the truth while the Internet is quite not reliable.
On another hand, the Internet brings faster access through many gadgets like phones, computers or laptops so wherever you are, younger generations or older generations can easily access to. Besides, the disadvantage of coarse newspapers is the advantage of Internet newspapers, which is the benefit of the environment. A research points out that the printed inks are very harmful while online newspapers are less damaging to nature. Apart from this, using the Internet may support you share the news with friends, search for particular news or discuss with others...such as a blog, confession,...
To sum up, it quite hard to imagine that one day, printed newspapers disappear with the replace of online ones. With the majority of people, traditional newspapers always play an important role in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...y people, rural area, developing country,... For example, in Vietnam, especially i...
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Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...hich is the benefit of the environment. A research points out that the printed inks are ve...
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Line 9, column 593, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...with others...such as a blog, confession,... To sum up, it quite hard to imag...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... day, printed newspapers disappear with the replace of online ones. With the majority of pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, while, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23247232472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86052841021 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3430046997 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2292669538 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784115871217 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479608253504 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12710684863 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272576973438 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.