People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past, what are the reasons for this? What do you think can be done for it?
In the modern world people are lethargic and more prone to diseases than the people in the past. The unprecedented developments in the field of science and technology have lead to so many inventions that the need for physical exertion / activity has reduced to a great extent. The only way to improve this situation is for people to focus on their fitness levels and to eat a balanced diet.
The older generation performed all the chores manually and this required them to use all parts of their body. Consequently, they enjoyed better fitness levels than the present generation. Apart from that the diet was also very basic and healthy which kept the bones stronger. For instance, my grandfather had a very good physique even at the age of ninety. His diet consisted of green vegetables, salads and chapatis. Every evening he used to go for a walk which helped him to stay fit.
Today’s generation is far more educated than those in the past so it gives them the opportunity to understand their body well and take care of it accordingly. People need to plan a healthy diet to get the required nutrition for the body and at the same time unhealthy junk food has to be avoided. Fast foods like pizzas and burgers are very popular but they harm the body in the long to their excessive content of oils and carbohydrates. Physical fitness can be taken care of by following simple lifestyle changes like using stairs in place of lift etc. Walking and exercising can also be included in the fitness regime.
It is rightly said that a healthy mind stays in a healthy body. If the body is ignored, the mind will automatically start getting affected which is an alarming situation for the entire body. Therefore, it is of utmost importance to take the necessary measures and stay fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...levels and to eat a balanced diet. The older generation performed all the chor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75320512821 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63064461919 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8932132682 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2352941176 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223754454133 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666407708827 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508643371777 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132926204545 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617322960321 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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