Many of world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
In recent years, many of world's regions are in recessionary situation of houses. Lack of housing occurs because there are a big increasing in population rate, likewise a big amount of immigrants and increasing in costs causing housing shortage.
The main reasons which cause shortage in housing is overcrowding. Day by day population of world is getting higher. The more people, the more houses and resources we need. Additionally, home builders have to give a big amount of money for building houses and apartments. It should not be forgotten that for building accommodation businessmen have to pay for construction materials, land, workers and for extra duties. All these duties and expenses lead businessmen to not build houses. Even if they do, these houses very expensive and people can not afford themselves to buy such houses. Also, it is not a secret that for recent years number of immigrants has increased rapidly. In order to find job or study people move to another countries and regions, this in turn leads to more demand for accommodation.
Conversely, it should be mentioned that every problem have solution. Particularly , homebuilders should start building apartment blocks instead of houses. Such policy will save more land and on contrary, will offer more people with home. Besides, for immigrants community houses can be built. In other words, immigrants and their families should be sent to special community houses with all facilities and comforts. As a direct result, there will not be demand for new commodities.
In conclusion, overpopulation, marking up costs for materials and increasing in the rate of immigration can cause house crisis. The best solution is building apartment blocks and community houses. For the reason that residential quarters allow to build more residence and community houses accommodate more people. As a direct result the rate of housing shortage will subside
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...very problem have solution. Particularly , homebuilders should start building apar...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'building'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: building
... reason that residential quarters allow to build more residence and community houses acc...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mmunity houses accommodate more people. As a direct result the rate of housing sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, if, likewise, so, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28852459016 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90148968678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7737180858 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8095238095 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5238095238 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175221777368 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568295952852 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398469850068 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116457789044 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378519300279 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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