Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
Many people argued that children these days prefer spending most of their free time with eyes glued to the television rather than playing some sports. This tendency has resulted from several reasons and may have both negative and positive effect on the youngster's development
On the one hand, there are numerous explanations for this trend. First of all, the playground for sports and other outdoor recreation activities. It appears to be shreds of evidence that nowadays major of the land, especially in urban areas, is using for the purpose of commercial and accommodations. Thus, the playing fields for children's activities are bringing down significantly. In the second place is the massive schedule of the child. Children reportedly strive their best to got good marks. Consequently, they do not have any time to unwind and reenergize themselves or even if they have, it mostly in the late-night which is not suitable for playing sport. Furthermore, there is the accelerated growth of the internet and other kinds of indoor entertainment which is more attractive to kids than sport. Last but not least, parents are allegedly responsible for their lack of care and affection to their offsprings. By way of illustration, many unfortunate children who suffer from miserable family life choose gaming and television as an element of escapism.
Everything have strength and limitation. Television and the mass media can be harmless fun that can improve the child's mental agility. This is shown by many children who expose to game during a reasonable time a day having demonstrated abilities to make quick decisions and react quickly to unexpected situations. Nonetheless, if the children have excessive consumption of game playing or television watching, it can be quite addicted. Apparently, it may lead to the physical inactivity which is quite detrimental to their mental and physical health
Overall, tv watching among children is overweight the time spent on playing sport due to several causes including lack of playground, hectic academy life or poor family bonding. Thus, it can have positive impacts such as improve mental agility or negative impacts of physical inactivity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, thus, such as, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33717579251 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90421290097 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6580408839 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.941176471 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224243390334 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06015040959 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625611112251 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153315202708 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654872434524 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.