It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than living with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
university is a place for people want to studying. In this topic, it is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than living with parents. I agree students stay away from house is better than staying with parents because students can be more independent and they can have many experiences.
On the one hand, university students be more independent. if they live far from their home, they can learn to manage their live, anything do themselves to survivor in live. Therefore, it is profitably for university students they can have many advantages from stay apart from parents. For example, if they live with their parents anything can easily to do, can finish quickly, or they can't manage their money because they can get more money from their parents. In short, students while living far from their house can be more independent than students while staying at home.
On the other hand, students can have a lot of experiences. From living away from home, students will through many obstacles and trials. Consequently, students will find the way out for their problems by themselves, and students can have life knowledges from stay apart from their parents. For instance, students can have many friends from different cultures, countries, or religions if they study abroad and they can help each other to finding the way out of their problems or obstacles. In brief, students can have many experiences and benefits from stay away from their house.
In conclusion, university students who live away from home is better than live with parents due to be more independent and having a lot of experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: University
university is a place for people want to studying....
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...ent and they can have many experiences. On the one hand, university students be ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...niversity students be more independent. if they live far from their home, they can...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sily to do, can finish quickly, or they cant manage their money because they can get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03663003663 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58380187874 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40293040293 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2334368863 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413575959433 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209264720817 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16060114758 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348885562983 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117898121933 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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