Every recent inventions are useful for own purpuse and for the society there are some inventions in disfunctioning and some are in
positive way but we find many inventions in positive helping and guiding people and society which makes people comfortable
firstly there are many new inventions in couple of sectors they helps in educational,medications,automobiles,mobile phones. inventors keep on
updating these invention because in india there is a huge demand in new inventions . recently in automobile sector,inventors have invented
a new four wheeler and two wheeler running in battery.single time of electricity plug in give you 150 km for bike and 450 km for car running.
consequently phone sectors,engineers are used to update their phones for every six months because in india we find many competitors
are competing to get new inventions so that can reach huge in demand among the population but in other way inventions are more beneficial to society
there are some inventions got collapsed recently. there was a news published in Tamil nadu about mallfunctining in wind mills which consist
electricity got burnt due to climatic coditions moreover there are some disfunctining inventions due to the fluctuation of electricity.
so we should have only the government approved inventions,so that would be safe to your surroundings and your self as well.
to conclude new inventions are beneficial many inventions that helps to society and helps for your purpuse but we do have some disfunctioning
inventions so that,most important rule is about getting government approved so we can have it in beneficial and safe way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5462962963 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.07166784627 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7167831786 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.142857143 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381854044832 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169399847558 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111777089436 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153919878458 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114138718798 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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