letter to your friend
To John,
It's been a long time since we met with each other. I'm writing this letter to tell you that about 6 months ago, I had applied to Queen's University for doing my further studies and yesterday, I received a confirmation mail from them that I got admit incoming fall semester.
My course is divided into 4 semesters and the time duration of each semester is 6 months. So, it's 2 years' study. My classes will start on the 20th of September. I have classes on alternate days.
As you already know, the Financial condition of my family is not so good and I am the elder son of the family. Therefore, I will be requiring a part-time job to pay my living expenses and repay my tuition fee.
Once you told me that you are working in a huge store called Wallmart. So, Can you ask form your friends or from your manager, if there is any vacancy for me?
I look forward to hearing from you. Also, pay my regards to your parents on behalf of me.
With Love,
Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...long time since we met with each other. Im writing this letter to tell you that ab...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'queen'.
Suggestion: Queen
...at about 6 months ago, I had applied to Queens University for doing my further studies...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...xpenses and repay my tuition fee. Once you told me that you are working in a h...
^^^^
Line 17, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anager, if there is any vacancy for me? I look forward to hearing from you. Also...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41530054645 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36495257601 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693989071038 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.058268141 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1538461538 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131337542439 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359728115795 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809032423831 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665220150927 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707882795278 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.