Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.
Teenagers are those who usually have to deal with many problems in their daily life. The reasons for this depend on various factors such as their country's laws enforcement, customs, and their family background. Furthermore, teenagers from different regions of the world have to cope with certain problems of that region. As a young Asian student, I share many of the issues that teens in my country regularly face.
To begin with, Vietnam itself is a cultural country where a diversity of traditions can easily be found. This means that the way children brought up in this nation will somewhat be more complicated and advanced. Additionally, due to the Vietnamese language system, a word can have many synonyms at once, yet, the context of each word differ from each other which depends on the role of a person with one another. Therefore, even when child, Vietnamese teenagers have to follow many rules based on the culture itself.
Not only teenagers in Vietnam has to be disciplined in the way they communicate to adults, but there are also rules between the two sexes. In the past, there were many mandatory and strict rules for both women and men. Women were unable to freely marry the man they want, while men were not allowed to be to closed to a woman. Until now, those rules still exist, yet, they are less popular as the harsh opinion on the relationship of the two sexes slowly disappears. Additionally, teenagers in Vietnam also counter with sexual problems. People in Vietnam often have deep-rooted prejudice against homosexuals while teenagers in America have the rights to express their gender without being heavily criticized.
The strict rules which Vietnamese teenagers have to face with regularly are now slightly decreasing. It is due to the tendency of exchanging traditions and customs with other nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0131147541 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60574273279 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6553650069 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117960481841 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426810651337 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486182319796 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767699526272 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418731842056 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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