Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines . To what extent do you or disagree .
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and it offered us new avenues so that we updated with latest news and current affairs . Majority of people opine that conventional newspaper will totally disappear because of new technology. However, I do not completely agree with this viewpoint because newspapers are cheapest source of getting news.
To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the traditional newspapers became so popular . First of all, people are habitual to read newspaper while drinking tea or coffee . Every person can be seen in front of door for waiting newspaper . Moreover, newspaper are cheapeast source of information . Even rich and middle class people afford to buy newspaper . For instance, each person can buy newspaper because it is cheapest as compared to other methods of news and also available at 3 Indian rupee .
Furthermore, newspapers are easy to carry . We read newspaper while travelling and it provide us knowledge about what is happening in world . Apart from this , electricity and other appliances are not required. Reading newspaper is very easy and cheapest . Moving further , the other attachments are like icing on the cake such as business news,fashion updates and technology information .
On the other hand , due to the advancement of technology people have access to watch and read news on television and mobile phones . Vidoes provide a clear image of every circumstance . Also , each person can download news vidoes and send it to near and dear ones . Vidoe news also provide accurate and detailed information and it is also useful for masses.
In gist , I would like to assert that newspapers never lost its value because it is affordable by every kind of people and folks are habitude to read newspaper.
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things. this has made our life easier and comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialsm. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? 73
- Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines . To what extent do you or disagree . 78
- Some people think that maintaining public libraries is a waste of public money since a computer system can replace their function To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- Some people say that all secondary and higher school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? 73
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organisations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, while, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2323943662 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82113168732 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5287226375 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2105263158 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166145989154 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546543459039 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041446312707 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909542683985 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403761251037 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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