Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society, while other think people have more responsibilities as a member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
some people think that academic study of historical background at schools is consider of crucial significance than that of studying scientific subjects as well as information technology. I completely agree with that of the last option. In this essay, I will discuss both choices systematically.
some people believe that studying history which is an important aspect in their lives. firstly, so as to guide the descendants to know the past history of their grandfather, grandmothers as well as political and economic events in these previous era. therefore, they will be aware of these actions.
secondly, they will be aware of the historical issues of the bad experiences happened during this stage of history. therefore, they will be able to manage, avoid and deal with such situations in their future life. Finally yet importantly, they can amend any bad matters and implementing smart solutions in order to overcome these obstacles in their future. For instance, in our country individuals and authorities cooperated with each other in order to promote the scholars who study history rather than those who are studying science. while these competitions are intending to encourage them for improving their academic achievements strictly at this subject. however, there is no promotion regarding other scientific scholars in our district.
On the other hand, some people are convinced with the opinion that agree with teaching the pupils scientific fictions at schools is considered more important than history subjects do. In this aspect,
they rely on certain motives. firstly, they defend their notion by the idea that the student will be motivated while studying scientific subjects that is why they will be motivated in such cases compared to history students.
secondly, studying scientific aspects of these subjects will enhance their academic performance and add many merits to their innovative activities and capabilities. therefore, this will be of crucial importance to become excellent achievers in their academic attainment compared to those studying history at the same level. For an example, from the research studies published, it has been shown that teaching science for students will make them the top of their classes and in the future. In addition to that, they will avail the community more than those studying history classes.
To sum up, I definitely agree with idea of student should be taught scientific subjects rather than history classes to make them beneficial for our community and their academic status. however, other subjects like history might be useful in certain specialties and other situations. Although, this is totally will depend on financial budget, encouragement and the community itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44600938967 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81451385516 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483568075117 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3232716268 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.454545455 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68181818182 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818715542513 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297093762899 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418451509882 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593779159826 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503847066599 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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