People nowadays work hard to buy more things. this has made our life easier and comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialsm. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
In the materialistic society , people needs have been increasing by leaps and bounds so people do hard work to purchase expensive things . No doubt that it made our life easier and enjoyable but due to such materialsm people lost their traditional values and customs have been absent because of giving importance to unnecessary wants.
To begin with , in this contemporary era people do hard work so that they fulfil their family desires and wants. Because of giving too much time to work people may not be able to spend time with their Kith and kins . As a result , they face conflict because they have no mutual understanding . Moreover , people buy expensive things because they think if they do not have latest gadgets or clothes of the newest fashion they do not have an identity . They think that they shall not be treated in social circle and shall get no respect from peers .
Furthermore , by giving so much time to do hard work is not a good idea because masses do not have time to spend with other peoples and also they may not be able to learn the history of their country and festivals and do not enjoy precious moment of time with their friends and family .
On the other hand , due to modernisation in technology people life became easier and comfortable . With the invention of latest gadgets such as computer and mobile phone folks complete their work without doing mistakes . People also learn various things because of latest technology . No doubt that it made our life convenient but majority of people balance their life .
In gist , I would like to assert that it is vital to do hard work to achieve goals but traditional values are significant . Masses only to balance their life so that they do not lost their tradtions and customs .
- Some people say that all secondary and higher school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? 73
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things. this has made our life easier and comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialsm. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? 73
- Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television However television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well educated today To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 79
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organisations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78618421053 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45528599063 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463815789474 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6811714778 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276935020804 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110772946801 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679959638398 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179121475284 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683654519617 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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