Central and local government make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer.
People hold different views about whether representatives of the countries should spend their money for poor people or for entertainments as festivals. There is number of reasons why government can invest income for both of sides.
On the one hand,the problem of poverty is becoming widely distributed. There are more and more poor people who don't have their own roof over head,who can not buy food for themselves,because of that government should take responsibility of this problem. For instance,they can organize charitable organisations which will make events where each wishful can donate money. If these kind of organisation have support from government,they will be more successful.
However,there is a really good possibility to double revenue by promoting entertainment activities for population. For example,by organization summer festivals,with games,music and dance. It will attract a huge amount if people where they will spend a lot of energy and buy a big number of drinks and snacks,at the same time they will have fun. Earned money government can invest to poor people and help them. Therefore,the problem can be solved and there is no need to restrict budget of country only for some of reasons.
To sum up,while many people argue that there should be a control for what government should pay attention more,I totally agree that there should be golden mean about this statement.Population can can fun,at the same time it can help to increase the revenue of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27731092437 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23540597864 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596638655462 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7073555874 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234326151385 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863357045647 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577485846305 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156668627164 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031693455103 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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