Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary life, the ceaseless proliferation of budget airlines has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although the question of whether customers are able to reap significant benefits from experiencing cheap airlines services or not has been contentious, I personally agree that economical air travel exerts some dazzling advantages.
There are a variety of reasons why advocates argue that it is beneficial to travel by airplanes using reasonably priced airlines services. First, air travel contributes to lessen the amount of traveling time. Unlike cars, and trains, using airplanes as a means of transport to move to far-away countries offers people opportunities to save time, in which they are able to spend more time on their business or leisure trips. Second, as some airline corporations are inclined to lower the price of tickets to welcome the crowded number of customers, these companies are likely to offer people from all walks of life golden chances to utilise their services. For example, Vietjet Air - one of the most prevalent airlines companies in Vietnam has observed an increasing number of customers every year thanks to its appealing sales promotion campaigns in special occasions such as summer, and Tet holiday. For this reason, not only the rich but also poor-stricken people can also experience air travel, and even get exposed to their favorite places once in their lifetime, which enhances the living standard as a whole.
Others are in favor of the idea that the drawbacks of budget airlines eclipse its merits. Poor quality in services remains one of the biggest concerns to customers. In fact, they might encounter some problems such as delay hours, and negative attitudes of managers and staffs due to the credibility of the airline corporations. For example, it is common in Vietnam to witness numerous cases of conflicts between customers and staffs, which leads to the cancellation of their flights without money refund. As a consequence, these companies are likely to face a dilemma of bankruptcy.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that both views are well-grounded. In my opinion, I side with the advantages of economical air travel, and it is also advisable to opt for the most suitable airlines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...reat deal of public attention. Although the question of whether customers are able to reap significant ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26519337017 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87982503362 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6614657562 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.066666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17386090269 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560362466437 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050104063837 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104702792389 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426338357454 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.