Today, many companies and businesses are involved in sports. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Presently, many businesses and corporates are making huge investments in the field of sports. several people believe that it may hamper the spirit of the game however, in my opinion, there are more benefits as compared to drawbacks. increasing money inflow in games results in better opportunities and improvement in economic conditions of the country.
To begin with, sports have benefitted a lot with the arrival of investments from various companies. certain games like hockey or badminton which were on the verge of extinction are revived and came in to mainstream, as companies decided to promote and finance them. As businesses joined sports, the opportunities to play expanded and players get varied platform to showcase their talent. For instance, the ongoing cricket league matches has given a new direction to game thereby provided a great opportunity to the fresh talent to head start their career. Additionally, it boosted country's economy by hosting games at a global level. Apart from this, it has widely influenced the youth to pursue sports as their career, who were earlier reluctant to do it citing its dicey future and short-term advantages.
On the other hand, there are certain negatives as well. many sports persons complain to play under the management who does not have any knowledge or background of that sport. For them it is a source to generate profit, which sometimes creates tremendous pressure on the team to win in any condition. this also resulted in increasing incidents of match fixing and usage of drugs to enhance the performance. several events showed that the spirit of playing the game has finished and it is now just a way to earn money.
To close with, undoubtedly, the negative elements have come to the surface as corporates started to plunge in sporting events, nevertheless, it has helped to make the sport popular again among the fans and provided fresh hope to many sporting professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14150943396 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80761965653 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6633332143 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975416597137 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314812967922 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462376718035 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552226415849 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230967308272 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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