Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.

Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is becoming a trend that people like to shop online from different website available on internet, such as, Amazon, which is one of the famous e-commerce site in the U.S. and many other countries. this essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. this essay will first outline some advantages and explain why there are more advantages of online shopping and buying things on the internet and then present a disadvantage as why internet is encouraging people to buy more by showing attractive pictures and using good marketing techniques and strategies.

some people think that buying things online such as flight tickets or train tickets, academic books or novels and even grocery would help them to save time. it it " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">has been seen that people now live in nuclear families; hence, they do not

get time to go for grocery shopping as both of the partners, particularly

husband and wife, work at different different " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">locations. So, getting grocery to cook on time is a big relief for

them. For example, the number of working women women " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">is being increased. We have seen in past that women used to go for grocery

shopping as she used used " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">to be one who used to

cook. but, as the number is rising, women tend to look for online options to

get grocery at home by saving time and energy.

other than that, online shopping gives many options to buy items, such as, books. buying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a lesser price. Due to cash on delivery option, one does not even has to go to anyone's doorstep or to a shop to buy a book. For example, while I was in the U.S. on my exchange program, I was totally new in the city and did not know much about the city. Someone told me about Craiglist.com and asked me to buy used books from there. I put an ad and within 2 days, Mr. John contacted me and gave an option to deliver the book free of cost. it was a perfect option for me as I had to pay half a price. On the other hand, it is not necessary that people show the true picture of their products or services they are offering online. but, in most of the cases, the e-commerce takes this matter seriously and carefully verifies these sellers. For instance, on AliBaba.com, each and every seller has has " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">to be verified and give true

and honest pictures their products. Moreover, after each sale, usually buyers

give reviews to sellers and the product they buy. Also, there are tons of

platform on Social Media where one can write about any problem they face while

buying online.

To conclude, online shopping is a great innovation for people who work

full-time. it saves time and cost at the same time. even getting things on your

doorstep make life easier. while, the drawback of not meeting the buyer and not

seeing the original products mat create some problem. hence, most of the times,

online shopping is a smooth experience.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2760.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 545.0 315.596192385 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06422018349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38818456258 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 834.3 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6090739184 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9615384615 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163755260629 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464197918614 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698259393218 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423122627847 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791678761842 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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