Studying abroad has become very popular for many students. What are the benefits of taking a degree course in a foreign country, and discuss any drawbacks?
Studying in the university has basically so crucial for beginning a professional, well-paid career and numerous people make a decision to take a degree course overseas. Without a doubt, there are more benefits to acquire a high standard education, however the tremendously excessive expense of studying aboard is a significant obstacle for some students.
Unquestionably, most students select to undertake a degree course aboard to take benefit of the higher quality education offered by western universities. To explain more clearly, most tertiary institutions in the United Kingdom, the United States and Australia, for instance, have very high ranking, and the essential reason for this is they have established superior research facilities and employ the world’s top professors in their chosen fields. On the contrary, in my country, Thailand, none to the universities is in the world’s top 500 ranking and there are fewer international courses available to local students. Generally, those students who have chosen to study in a western university can benefit from superior education from these expert lecturers within first-class facilities so develop first world knowledge or specific work skill such as understanding international law. This advantage is likely to help them greatly with their career prospects.
On the other hand, the high overall cost of studying for degree overseas can be major problem for some students. This observation is supported by foreign student charged which is usually double prices when compared with native students, accommodation rates in western cities is quietly expensive than the local student country and general living expresses also exorbitant in some cities. Moreover, the chance of studying aboard extremely difficult for Asian students. For example, Thai students have to afford all expense for studying which is sometime must be in debt because of borrowed money in order to paid general living that pressure on the family. Furthermore, some students forced to work part-time during their course to help pay the costs that pressure on the students.
In conclusion, studying aboard is the best of way to success in the field of their careers and making a chance to get high well-paid although studying overseas causes several problems of effecting with some students and their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53591160221 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90090631886 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560773480663 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9676171927 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.153846154 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22306316334 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877973608336 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497157705964 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136036818456 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576896198195 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 11.7677419355 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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