Television sports shows such as Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much. To you agree or disagree?
International sports hold prominence in the current world either by bridging gap between various nations or by inspiring the young. As a consequence, broadcasting sports has become so much popular. These telecasts definitely motivate lot of youngsters to stay fit and healthy.
The main reason why sport matches can bring a change is because not all but majority of the youth always spend glued to the television most of the time. So, if channels focus on various international sports taking place around the globe, these programmes can infuse a thought in the youth to practise some skill. An interesting statistics published by Sportsera magazine revealed that 4 out of 10 adolescents in the UK have developed interest in football and enrolled in training classes after watching premier league. So, watching sport events can possibly ignite a passion in the teenager and motivate to work out.
Another strong reason is that youngsters idolise either sport stars or film stars and television is the only source of medium through which they can visually watch their favourite players in action. This provides children and teenagers an opportunity to learn from their icons, the way they play , the way the players showcase the skill. This, in a way encourages them to imitate or master their favourite player's moves and eventually motivating them to play the sport or represent the college team or local club or may be the country.
Hence, I strongly agree that telecasting games and sports such as world championships, leagues, and olympics are a tremendous sources of stimulation and support to youth irrespective of their interest in exercise or games
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20446096654 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8062149329 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7933749829 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.272727273 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184441778896 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667290580305 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551870968224 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116016215679 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556018268392 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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