Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
art as a token of culture and history has always been protected by government, in order to pass on generations by generations. Recently, with facing significant numbers of starvation and rising rate of unemployment, scholars proposed that, “nation should suspend government funding for art when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry.” I agree with the proposal.
while some people might argue that art is an important part of culture and present generation has the responsibility to protect it and inherit to next generations to study the culture and history of the nation. starvation and poverty are economic issues that happened in every country; it will be fixed without sacrificing funding for art from governments. Overall, the significance of art as an accumulative essence of history and culture surpasses the influences of undergoing starvation and poverty.
Although art is the essence of cultures of a nation should be well-protected, there is a prefix, which is nation. when a nation is facing significant number of starvation and severe unemployment, impending possibilities of crash is emerging. if government neglects the imminent danger and still indulgently funding art when large amount of people is starving to death, the regime will be toppled, and the art that presents the history and culture will be displayed and exhibited in foreign museums.
At the moribund era of the once glorious Qing dynasty in china, government funds lots of its nation`s fortune on protecting its art, museums were built at an outrageous rate, such as the Summer palace, the palace museum; while its people were facing severe poverty. The hatred of people to the local regime were escalating in a direct proportion to relentless ground-breaking museums were being built. Finally, economy hits its lowest, with poverty is so rampant that crime rates increases; the money spent on funding art, depleted the government treasury. foreign countries saw the predicament of the crashing pendulum nation was facing, invaded china; at the same time the hatred of citizens that have been accumulated for so long that exploded whiles the invasion of foreign countries. The once grandiose architects and museums were burnt in ashes, the paintings, sculptures and all other art forms were pillaged by both foreign troops and local citizens. Now, Chinese people only can embrace their own essence of culture in France, England and all the other foreign countries.
art flourishes the finest when a nation is prosperous the most. The Renaissance of originated in italy during middle age, when italy was the most prosperous country in Europe; the art Culmination of china took places in Tang dynasty and Song dynasty; these two dynasties were the most powerful and prosperous empires at the time. when a national is in its poverty line with lots of its nation`s people facing starvation and high unemployment rate, there is no country in the history with blossom of art emerging at the same time.
art reflects its habitational prosperity. A nation prosperity ensures protection of its heritage art and development of future art; a nation`s poverty also guarantees impending dangers to its existing art; and there is less chance for developing future art. if a nation could not protect its people from starvation and poverty, let alone its art. nation should make sure its people`s basic needs being satisfied first, then start to make budget for its art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, still, then, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2949.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31351351351 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92939062563 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 917.1 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1805405356 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219806171332 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780091727016 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648211972304 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139595266857 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667898215582 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.