Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does it cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
these days youth do fewer fitness activities. It is considered by some that the world cup and other championships motivate people for their health, while others advocate there are several different options to help people for fitness. this essay agrees that adverts on fitness centers and providing information on nutrition could encourage people to do physical activities.
many sports events such as Commonwealth games, Ranji championships motivates youngsters to participate more in games and make their career in sports. In other words, many adults practice for their lifetime to take part in such events so that they could earn money for their families. these games help them to maintain their health for a longer time. For example, the study showed in Amity University in March 2019, stated that Dara Singh is of age 90, though he is still active as a 45 years old adult. Despite this, only some youngsters get a chance to play for sports events, and others stop playing due to the disappointment of not selecting in any game, which drives them to leave exercises.
some people consider that advertisements on sports centers and information on a balanced diet could help people to enroll more in physical exercises. this is because many people lured with fashionable gym ads and purchase memberships to start physical activities. Also, after understanding the detrimental effect of fast food, many people began taking a proper regimen. For instance, the survey conducted by The times in June 2011 reported that Muscle blaze brand recorded an 8% hike in their sales when they started advert with slogan "Ziddi Hoon Main" to encourage people for fitness.
To conclude, this essay suggests that sports events such as The world cup and annual championships target only some numbers of youth to participate and do fitness exercise, however, educating people with a proper diet and spreading information more on fitness centers could lead more audience to perform physical activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28660436137 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72626432199 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6169368572 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.538461538 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155370811504 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618280929505 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411790543073 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10222319258 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437240212853 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.