By punishing muderers with death penalty society is guilty of committing murder. Therefore prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement?
It has been widely debated to to find the best of punishment for criminals that have killed someone. While iy is argued that prison is the most appropriate kind of punishment for them I have some contradictary views.
Firstly, criminal, being cause the death of someone, should be ordered as serious punishment such as death penalty as they have murdered an innocent person. Even if they are compassionated giving some year sentence in jail in many cases the offenders are cought and arrested for killing one more person. Because majority of inmates who have been doing their time in prison have already got used to the life of prison as they have spent much of their lives. I personally believe it is would not be a sensible idea to blame society.
On the other hand, prison is not said to be the most effective way of rehabilitating offender in many instances. Foremost, many prisoners have luxurius such as television, internet and some are served by great chefs. In other words, the most of inmates are provided with every needs by people which ordered them to commit a crime. Moreover, some of them are released earlier which could again enable them to break the law. For these reoson I think the goverment should make jails more serious form of punishment rather than paving the way for them to feel as if they are on holiday.
Yet, no one is born being criminal or with the aim of commiting a crime. When some offenders are asked ' why did you do that and what forced you to be criminal' they often reply they were not loved or appreciated were not showed the right way. In some cases offenders should be rehabilitated in prison as long as they truly realized what they did was wrong.
Overall, although some people argue that prison is realtively better than ordering death penalty to murderers I think there must be fair.
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achivements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
- With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting many animal species are becoming endangered and sone are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem? 78
- Extreme sports such as ski diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do tou agree or disagree with this view? 56
- By punishing muderers with death penalty society is guilty of committing murder. Therefore prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement? 56
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opini 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, i think, kind of, such as, in many cases, in other words, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70278637771 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45439184669 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7690368597 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193366999707 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066970063117 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04334414069 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11646710203 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015073262827 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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