People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Sleep is very important to humans. However, modern humans tend to sleep fewer than previous. In my opinion, lack of sleep will cause many drawbacks for not only an individual, but also society.
Nowadays, humans seem to have less sleep duration than before. In fact, many people said that they reduced their sleeping hours due to the overload of works. To illustrate, architects and engineers always have to do lots of extra working hours for their projects at night to reach the deadline. In addition, stress also has an important role in causing less sleep duration. It affects a lot in sleeping quality. People could not sleep well if they have plenty of things need to worry about at night. However, there is a group of people having less sleep duration because of the attraction of night activity such as go to a bar or club. Sadly, most of them are youth.
Lack of sleep causes many drawbacks for an individual. Many documents have proven that sleep duration is connected to humans health. Normally, adults should rest for eight hours per nightt or they will feel tired and easy to get angry. In the other hand, does not have enough sleep also affect the work’s quality. People will not sober enough to find out their mistakes.
Sleeping less not only cause the problems for an individual, but also society. In fact, we can hear plenty of accidents caused by the sleepy driver every day. As I mentioned before, humans tend to get mad easily if they do not have enough sleep, therefore, the number of arguments occur on the street will increase dramatically. It is a negative society development.
In conclusion, sleep has an important role in humans development. It helps us to release our tiredness and stress after a long day at workplaces. Therefore, humans should set up a balance between working hours and resting hours. I believe that our works will have the highest quality if we have enough sleep duration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85285285285 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48397546245 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528528528529 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8670512148 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158461361687 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529898907956 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393063095228 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941916676538 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571539014244 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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