Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life ‎is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan ‎and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life ‎is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan ‎and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

In the modern era, the life has became more and more comlex. It could be a significant challenge for ‎many people. Some people believe that modern life does’t need any plan and organization but in my ‎opinion, have a paln and organization forcontricating life is essential. In next paragraphs I will elaborate ‎my reasons.‎

The first exquisite rason to be mentioned is; saving more time. People don’t palnning their times ‎without any plan, because many elements and factros envolve them and they loss many of ‎oppurtiunities. Having a comperhensive plan not only is indisputable but also, could arrange people life ‎and make programable their works. Planning in daily life save more time and reduce people waste ‎time‏. ‏Hence, planning could incrase people efficiency. My own experience is a complete parablein this ‎case. When I was a college student, I was working coincide. I was at university half a day and I was ‎going to my job place quickly, in addtition, I had other controversial issues such english class, sport club ‎etc. I design a plan and and wrote a schadule that cover my weekly times. My plan was a flexible idea ‎that gave me more time during the week, whit this plan I could fulfill my master degree with the ‎highest point among other classmates. ‎

The second reason that is substantial is; reducnig your cost. If you have a noticable plan, you could ‎reduce your extra cost and save more money, even you could organize economical aspect of your life ‎forceful. Whithout any plan or vision, you don’t give to your aims, owing to many of goals need a ‎financial support with exact design. Many of investor who bring their money to a project, before every ‎works they praper planning documents. Investor believe that complexity and unforcastable situation ‎of life and economic need a organiation structure and alternative options. The recent study that drived ‎from London Economic and Society Institute, depicted that at least 75percent of people and investor ‎that have a complicated life have a bluprint; plus, more than 90 percent of them are proper person ‎with low cost. Therefore, this institute has provided a instruction for Britanian to reduce cost and more ‎saving money. Finally, In my view the economic effect of life organization encouragement people to ‎planning for life, don’t imagine you it is a exaggerate.‎

In short, based on ofermentioned; even though, some people don’t belive a planning and organizing ‎life. In my viewpoint, organization complex life is a basic action and it is neccasry as a food for body. I ‎have two reasons that disclose this matter, one is saving people times and give them extra times; two, ‎it is reduce people cost and give them more money. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
In the modern era, the life has became more and more comlex. It could be a sig...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...class, sport club ‎etc. I design a plan and and wrote a schadule that cover my weekly t...
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Line 3, column 913, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '‎ the highest'.
Suggestion: ‎ the highest
...could fulfill my master degree with the ‎highest point among other classmates. ‎ The s...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...hey praper planning documents. Investor believe that complexity and unforcastable situa...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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...ce cost and more ‎saving money. Finally, In my view the economic effect of life o...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, at least, in short, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18241758242 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94637824953 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551648351648 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.446492098 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.52173913 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95652173913 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227804014964 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070395132883 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485725848268 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153524222354 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423894478438 0.0645574589148 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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