As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples your own knowledge experience.
<p style="white-space: normal;">Globalisation has made the world a smaller place. It has brought people and various cultures close together through the advent of various technologies. The is that this may lead to total loss of cultural identity is one. I partially agree with this view.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Mass communication methods such as the internet, various social media websites and newspapers have made it easy to communicate and talk to person in any remote corner of the world. Information on any topic can be easily obtained. As a result of this the herd mentality is rapidly and what is considered applicable by a majority of the population is what most people follow. For instance, most people around the world now consider jeans and t-shirts as their wardrobe staples while the traditional outfit are almost never worn.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Developments in transportation technology has also allowed people to travel quickly find any place in the world. As a result of this they can learn easily about various cultures and beliefs in other countries and disseminate it easily when they return home leading to more homogeneity.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">However, the reason I only partially agree is because while globalisation merges cultures and people together it also makes people realise and value their own unique identities and traditions. As a result people try their level best to preserve this cultural identity in order to keep it from completely disappearing.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">In conclusion, I would say that while globalisation is vital in the present day and has numerous positive effects it is important to ensure that it does not completely overtake the varied cultures, ideas and traditions that are present all over the world.</p>
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- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent d 56
- As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent d 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1289, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ever, the reason I only partially agree is because while globalisation merges cultures and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76811594203 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.48393243409 2.80592935109 160% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.314813593 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.888888889 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135326336508 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676052466974 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556974150153 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135326336508 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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