Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">Notwithstanding the fact that campus accommodation is inevitable due to the out of town status of certain students, there are also candidates opting to stay with their family taking an advantage over their native resident ship being the university locality. The hostel residence will have an edge by preparing the individuals to be independent and more social than a home stayed group, however there are also trade offs revolving around university stay.
The pros of campus stay might be numerous. one point to consider is that, the hostels will help individuals socialize to a broader range of cultural disparity, making them confident to handle a range of people when when start their jobs. The exposure gained at the moment and the friendships made , will enthrall the students to a wide perspective life post education. Another point is that, the home-away stay will persuade the students to become more self-reliant and will provide a chance for them to explore their autonomous adulting in a safe campus environment. It is important to note that candidates staying away from home, will have a head start to recover from home sickness , over the close family-bonded graduates, which might aid when they directly enter into professional market, initiating their careers. Furthermore, the money and time management , while being self is worth mentioning the qualities the students might inculcate while being a campus resident. the students staying at home will have a lot of self time to think and work on their future career goals, and are hardly disturbed on frequent parties or night outs. The affection , a family network will create will help the individual deal with any low grades or sad moments. The home stayed candidates will be less influenced by bad habits like gambling, drinking alcohol etc
The cons, however might include the wasted time while travelling from home to college, which can be utilized on an educational front. In accord to the comfy developed staying with family, the students might develop a lethargic attitude that might leave the candidate incapable to handle tight project deadlines in their future jobs. The students stayed in hotels might be deviate to wrong spending though not required at the moment, when they watch one of their friends buying extravagant gadgets. The campus stay definitely will be costly leaving the students with more debts than the local residents.
The advantages of staying away from home though were high, the deviations or wrong habits that the students might catch while at hotels is worth the mention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25829383886 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98004579268 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537914691943 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 16.0 2.52805611222 633% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3319170829 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.933333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1333333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187518645854 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709498171802 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399270528503 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132658223261 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010546941968 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.