ecotourism
Although the lecture support the idea that Eco-tourism -also named Green-tourism- is an entirely good thing, the professor inform as that it has not just benefits. As everything in life, Eco-Tourism has good and bad aspects.
It is true that these new form of tourism produces less negatives effects than the regular way of tourism, for instance, less environmental stress than building a Resort. However, places for Eco-Tourism (for example, National Parks), needs infastructure, as roads, and its construction causes some damages; as an example, she talked about air and water pollution.
The reading says that the Eco-tourism encourages conservation of natural areas, but the professor indicates that there is a market for animals in danger and the products that derivates form they, besides plenty of illegal hunting that keep alive these market.
The author believes that Green-tourism provides jobs and better live conditions to the local people. However, the professors discuss these idea, by giving examples of cultural pollutions and explaining how the pay is low and there is a lot of foering people looking for and oportunity.
Eco-tourism has advantages, compared with regular tourism, but is not the perfect solution.
- language 60
- ecotourism environment 3
- ecotourism 3
- lectures or discussion 3
- Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and the students with almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to su 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 134, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; these ideas
...people. However, the professors discuss these idea, by giving examples of cultural polluti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 30.3222958057 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 192.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52083333333 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92193998739 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4678375254 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.8541721854 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.2367328918 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.42419426049 119% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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