Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
The importance of music is as other subject which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact to be more rational. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that music is as important as other subjects in school to promote learning in children life. children have lot of burden of studies on their shouldres.for instance medical.engniering study is very difficult. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that music do very entertain to children. they can change their mood. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that music can change our mood. When we feel very low music can change our mood. Besides, teachers should promote the music subject for children. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one cam reach to a conclusion that the benefits of music is as important as other subjects to promote learning in children life are indeed too great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Children
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fect is that music can change our mood. When we feel very low music can change our m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04819277108 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74911845797 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558232931727 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0230887717 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274656294817 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089780461982 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970093383129 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182592049729 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785612669834 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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