some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities or towns, only old people live in the countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
In our modern society, it is discovered that statistically youngsters are leaving from the countryside to move in cities and towns to pursuit better life while the elders stay in the countryside alone. This phenomenon has caused some social problems and there is something we need to change this situation.
Firstly, according to a report, young people who are working in cities or towns go back to their hometown only once or twice and stay for a few days per year because of the short vacation and stressed life. Since living alone in cities and seldom feel the warmth from elders, most of them feel lonely and depressed after work. Secondly, without the young generations` accompany, old generations feel pathetic and sad when living in countryside. This kind of separation bring no benefit to both of the two generation. Young people can not meet their responsibility of taking care of their old parents while the elders have no change to gain happiness from family life. Thirdly, the condition of countryside is worse than that of in cities, which brings a lot of difficulties to the elders as well, for example, there is a report saying that a 80 years old man died from heart attack for days without being noticed in countryside because of living alone and not rescuing in time. What is more, as most of youngster prefer to live in cities, it also bring some problems to cities such as traffic jams, air pollutions, unequal competition, uneven social resource allocation, etc.
To solve these problems, there are things that we can to. Firstly, government should take this issue seriously and try their best to develop the economy of countryside. Government can raise funds to construct the infrastructure in countryside which at the same time bring employment opportunities for youngsters. Secondly, local government should encourage younger generation to stay in countryside to do business or trading through establish some free-tax regulation, etc. Thirdly, the living condition need to be improved so that the elders can live happier and easier. For example, health care center and nursing house can be built and some elders can live together there in countryside.
In conclusion，government may take measures to alleviate the problems. Both youngsters and the elders may lead a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...gster prefer to live in cities, it also bring some problems to cities such as traffic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... uneven social resource allocation, etc. To solve these problems, there are thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12137203166 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95850732216 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532981530343 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7134588944 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.176470588 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369005849793 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948313673141 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520479392904 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186055826192 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109893120871 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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