The plans below show a student room for two students and a student room for one student at an Australian university.
The two pictures compare the design and weekly renting cost price of a room for one and two students two pupils and one for one person/ single and twin rooms for students at an Australian university.
Overall, it is clear that the room for two students is larger and equipped with more furniture. Also, the price of a single room is much lower than that of a double 2-person room.
At 200 dollars per week, the room for a pupil is 6 meters in length and 2.5 meters in breadth/width. The bathroom is located at in the top left corner and opposite the kitchen appliances, which include a microwave, a stove and a sink. There is a study desk situated to the right of the bathroom and a bed in the right corner with a window view. The student can also watch use the TV television on the wall opposite the study desk.
Paying 350 dollars per week, students live in a 6x4 square-meter/ a captive space of six by four meters, which is twice as large as the single one. The position of the bathroom, one study desk, and one bed are arranged similarly to the single room there are one bathroom, one study desk, and one bed arranged similarly to the single room. Besides, there is a new bookshelf added between the bathroom and the study desk. The kitchen area is also rearranged along the width of the room adjacent to the door, giving space for a table, chairs and the a television. The other study desk is close to a bed situated at in the bottom right corner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bathrooms'?
Suggestion: bathrooms
...arly to the single room there are one bathroom, one study desk, and one bed arranged s...
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Line 4, column 545, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...r, giving space for a table, chairs and the a television. The other study desk is cl...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37867647059 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39470912895 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463235294118 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9453395801 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387891958665 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138582783756 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154686456478 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301850074682 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16528575922 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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