In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
The increase of the average weight of people and the reduction of their health levels is becoming a major problem in several nations. This essay will examine the main causes of this and also give some possible solutions to this issue.
One of the major factors which result in the rise of human weight and the lessening of their health quality may be the unhealthy food. Specifically, with the hectic working schedule in addition to the laziness of each person nowadays, people usually consume fast food which contains a large amount of lipid and sugar. Thus, the people will become more and more weighty and finally overweight due to those chemicals. For example, in the Today News, it is estimated that millions of people in US tuck into fast food instead of healthy one. In addition, another reason leading to this problem is their current lifestyle. Clearly, it is commonly seen that in today's modern world, most people rarely spend their time doing exercise instead of using their smartphones in their free time. As a consequence, human beings will be prone to live in sedentary way. This will lead to not only the weight gain of people but also the reduction of their life expectancy. In other words, human lifestyle often make people overweight and unhealthy.
To matter this issue, some possible are eating healthy as well as doing exercise regularly. By following these two activities, human life quality will be improved day by day. Furthermore, they will not only have a balanced diet to keep fit but have good health as well. This will lead to the increasing tendency of their life expectancy.
To conclude, there may be some causes that have influences on average weight as well as general health among people. However, there are some certain solutions to combat this problem through and through by eating well and doing exercise on a regular basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90536277603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41997166813 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9762022237 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240844534664 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812998847791 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629924772402 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160857357655 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033121858596 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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