Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this point?
Despite the fact that overall economic condition of the world is improving year by year, there is still a large number of people who is in need of a financial support and agreeably, one of the most effective ways to reduce poverty, especially in low income communities, is charity. Whether everyone should contribute to the charity financially is a topic of dispute. In my opinion, not everybody is able to donate to charity and in this essay i will explain why.
First of all, not everyone makes enough money to give up fixed amount from their salary to charity. Middle class people which cover approximately half of the world population, are living on a budget. They barely can meet their own needs, so it is nearly impossible for them to contribute to the charity. Besides, many other ways exist to support charity. For example, a lot of people donate their old clothing and other items that are still in a usable state. Blood and organ donations are also very important for charity. Additionally, cafes and restaurants can provide free food for homeless people.
It would be ideal if all people could support charity. Everyone who earns enough should donate from their income to charity, however, unfortunately not everybody is able to provide support.
It seems to me that contributing to charity financially is not the only way to help people in need. Everybody should do their best to support charity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... improving year by year, there is still a large number of people who is in need of a financial su...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in low income communities, is charity. Whether everyone should contribute to the chari...
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Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to donate to charity and in this essay i will explain why. First of all, not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89166666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66237936607 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5912561029 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250834556616 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922559799831 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895669064061 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174095180594 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448220291072 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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