In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
education plays an important role in society's growth. In some developing countries, many people think that it is necessary to build more schools or give the number of teachers to tackle illiteracy while others believe the issue can be solved as having special tools for education such as computers and internet. this essay will discuss both of views and propose optimal measure.
To begin with, there are several reasons why people consider that government should invest fund on constructing schools and train teachers because it has brought tremendous benefits. Traditionally, the simple way to erase illiteracy is to encourage children go to school. As we know, each individuals start to study when they are 6 or 7 years old, their parent have to send them to school because they belive that it is good place to educate their kids and children can make friends and open their relationships. Besides, teachers are responsible for guiding them and help them acquire knowledge and skills. Moreover, school also provide moral subject to teach students become good citizens. Therefore, it would be better to focus on building schools as it brings signficantly beneficial factors for children.
However, those who against this might claim that providing some computers and Internets are more useful. this argument is probably true to some extent with the rapid development of economy having modern equipment are easy people in dealing with problems around them. Obviously, by clicking the button, everything will be shown in front of their eyes. it means they do not waste a lot time to know something. there is, thus, the internet are essential part for their lives.
Personally, I think investing on providing schools and teachers are more useful than buying computers and Internets because schools and teachers can connect closely with students and there are some interaction between them. Children can avoid being selfish as they only clue their eyes in front of the screen. it may harm their physical and mental.
In conclusion, base on the reasons I mentioned above, I believe that schools and teachers should be more considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20231213873 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61508793113 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604046242775 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2693611595 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364218182023 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909887264431 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948791652543 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205314366398 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063111519831 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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