TPO 24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
I am of the opinion that motivating the young people to do job is significant preparation for the individual's adulthood. I feel this way for several main reasons.
To begin with, children will learn new competency because they may undergo some difficulties while performing the novel matter. It is requisite knowledge and savvy to experience better future life since they will be prepared mentally and physically. My personal experience is compelling example of this. Around three years ago, I started doing full-time job during my summer holiday in light of convince of my parents. Even though I found it formidable, I accustomed one months later. Afterwards, I revealed that even my learning and focusing ability improved because I had improved my self-discipline and changed my point of view about life.
Secondly, adolescents will learn how they should manage their salary. They may comprehend value of money since they earned it themselves. Therefore, juveniles probably achieve more economical point of view by doing job. For example, previous year, my friend who spends too much money on unnecessary things started doing job. Henceforth, I realized that money he spends declined in amount although his earning had improved. When I ask him about reason why he changed personal attitude towards cash, he noted that his aspect have changed because of change in understanding of money.
Finally, juveniles will confront new environment and atmosphere by doing new job. Therefore, they will meet new people and vicinity, which is prodigious practical knowledge to manage their life in future. For instance, last summer, my friend who is timid and do not have any friend but me, started doing job with multitude whereas it was challenging for him. Afterwards, he ended up becoming benevolent and open to others because he made large body of friends while working.
In conclusion, I feel that working before get eighteen has huge impact on personal behavior. This is because they will make friends, learn the value of money and gather great knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... job is significant preparation for the individuals adulthood. I feel this way for several ...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...ugh I found it formidable, I accustomed one months later. Afterwards, I revealed that even...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ractical knowledge to manage their life in future. For instance, last summer, my friend w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23564954683 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78666803766 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8502663612 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.65 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13382509245 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041866128509 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392898660438 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796557529407 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497892572552 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.