You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Joe,
It is been some long days since we exchanged text. I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you today to intimate that I will be travelling to London to pursue English language course to enrich my career.
Basically, the tutor is in the mornings and I am free in the evenings. Perhaps, I have to take care of my expenses. Therefore, I am seeking your usual support to help me find a part-time job for me. Undoubtedly, it is obvious that I am assert to interact with native speakers. Thus, it will not only enrich my vocabulary knowledge but also speaking fluency.
By the way, I recall our last conservation that you uttered that you are working in the hotel restaurant. If you are still working with them, would you be able to find me some job opportunities? Else, circulate my details in your friends’ network to grab some opportunities.
I am eagerly waiting to meet you soon.
Your faithfully,
Sayu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'asserted'.
Suggestion: asserted
...e. Undoubtedly, it is obvious that I am assert to interact with native speakers. Thus,...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64457831325 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77629813336 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4999749273 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3076923077 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307013024505 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100706195103 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852419880561 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174976030429 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967739524858 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.