People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development
Internet and phone are becoming important part of human life. More and more advancement are leading folks to use internet and mobile for almost each and every activity. I assert that extreme dependence on this, will bring untoward repercussions, which will harmful for both social life and physical health of individuals.
To begin with, due to the popularity of mobile phone and internet undoubtedly it become extremely convenient to communicate with the peoples living far away. Although whole world has become a small village , as young generation are having friends even in different nations across the globe. Social networking sites like facebook, instagram and google are connecting the world but many a time due to this we are ignoring a person sitting next to us. The warmth and connection offered by traditional communication is really missing which help to build the deep relation among human beings. A visit to friend and relatives have decreased and all are busy with their cell phones. Hence, our social circle in increasing but real connection is deteriorating.
Moving further, there is gradual decrease in the outdoor activities among children and youngsters because of excess use of internet. Juveniles are enjoying games on computers and almost forgotten the tradition games which have actually beneficial for their physical and mental health. Health issues like obesity, week eye sights are continuously increasing at alarming rate and lack of outdoor sports is major reasons for this situation. Apart from this youth is also devoting little time for their health and fitness and keep themselves occupied on internet and mobile phones. Therefore the coming generation is less active and suffers from various health problems from the early age of the life.
In conclusion, unequivocally mobile and internet have huge advantages, but if we any thing in extreme it will be definitely cause harm to us in many ways same is with this also
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, really, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25159235669 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71420217081 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0322060155 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123212730249 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452358386701 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684816613529 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757886407698 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452845483137 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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