You recently saw a very good fil. You decide to write to your friend and recommend that she/he sees this film.
write a letter to your friend.In your letter :
1.Describe what the film is about
2.Explain why you think your friend should go see this film
3. Tell your friend when and where she/he could see this film
Dear hhhoo,
Hope you are keeping well. Sorry for not keeping in touch for ages. Things have been very chaotic with my new job.
I excited to tell you about a new movie I saw the other day. Its called the Avengers and it was absolutely incredible. Firstly it had your favourite hollywood actor, Chris Pines and the visula effects were mind blowing. However, the best part of the movie was its plotline, It is about superheroes trapped in space and how they defeate the evil menacing villian to save the earth from total inhillation.Moerover its your favourite Genre- Action fantacy. Anyway, I am sure you will love the cinematography of the movie, since your doing your masters degree in it.
It is till playing in the theatres and hopefully we can catch it together. You can pop over my house anytime and we can watch it in thearte near my house.It would be lovely seeing you after so many months.
Lots of love
gfg
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moerover
...o save the earth from total inhillation.Moerover its your favourite Genre- Action fantac...
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Line 4, column 413, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e earth from total inhillation.Moerover its your favourite Genre- Action fantacy. A...
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Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...e can watch it in thearte near my house.It would be lovely seeing you after so man...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6303030303 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56440277963 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5338922752 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4545454545 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178277455094 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572707541747 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586745193593 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099071881041 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521886660306 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.