Some people think that modern technology has more negative effects on our lives than positive ones. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that technological development has negative impact in our lives. In my opinion, modern technology has two sided-sword. one hand it provides advance quality of easy lifestyle and on other hand, it caused a great deal of damage to the environment. I agree that modern technology will brings many benefits to the world, but it also increase the potential for unimaginable chaos.
Firstly, technology have several downsides. For instance, everything from the air we breathe to food we eat has contaminated these days due to use and abuse of various invention of technology. For example, motor vehicles polluted air, pesticides contaminated food we eat. Furthermore, obesity is the one of the most common side-effect of using too much technological items. For instance, people are too comfortable in their comfort zone, and lack of exercise may result in obesity.
On the other hand, we are so habituated to having technology in our lives that it is now impossible to imagine a world without light-bulb, fans, refrigerator, mobile-phones and computer. Even if technology cause considerable damage to environment, it is impossible to convince people that they should stop using it. Secondly, there are circumstance when dependence on technology become irrelevant consideration. A typical example would be when someone's live depends on certain machine. Finally, a better solution to invest in green technologies that can reduce the negative impact on environment as well as human beings. For example, electric trains, cars and convention sources like solar and wind powers.
In conclusion, it is clear that technology certainly has more positive use. However, for its negative effect, it is capable to finding solution that caused by it. As technology continue to development, I sure it will become cleaner and greener.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36082474227 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11480135142 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4274599702 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0555555556 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20960973483 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639098027427 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466007834976 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127811094637 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440997562473 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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