The charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984 1993 and 2013

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The charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013

The pie charts give information about the total number of cars are sold and the percentage of each kind of them in Australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013.
Overall, it is clear that the sales had a dramatic increasing trend over the years, in which the sedans accounted for the major part of all the pie charts. In contrast, the number of the SVUs were maintained in the smallest sector in all the mentioned years.
In the 1984-1993 period, Australian residents witnessed an increasing trend of the new car sales from 32000 to 44000, in which the percentage of the sedans was 55% in 1984 decreased to 50% in 1993. Nevertheless, the percentage of the SVUs was 19% in 1984, had a slight rise to 21% in 1993. Likewise, the number of the others accounted for 26% in 1984, compared to that of 1993, at 29%.
After 10 years, in 2013, the sales of the Sedans rapidly grew up 57%, which was higher than ten years before by 7%. However, the sales of the SVUs and others had minute decreases, in which the figure of the SUVs dropped by 5% and that of the others decreased by 2%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, nevertheless, so, in contrast, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39393939394 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39238324737 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5253530033 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324164409183 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128044208508 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111937429872 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18571316923 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126647309715 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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