You forgot a wallet at a friend's place while you were there on the weekend. Write him a letter to ask to return the wallet.
Hi, James
I want to admit, that was the great holiday we just spent together. We played cricket on the beach behind your house, had a great musical night with a bbq. It was like a dream to me and I was not ready to wake up from it on the other day but, work calls every Monday! As I reached my home, I realized that I don’t have a wallet in my pockets.
I searched my bag and tent roll too but, it was nowhere to be found. I guess I left it at your house. You might find it in my room near a bed somewhere. I am sure that I haven’t brought it to the beach so in case you don’t find it in my room; you can search in the hall near the sofa where we sat.
My wallet contains some important documents like driving license, voter ID. Fortunately, I will be not needing them urgently. You will also find some cash in it. Take it out for yourself and transfer the amount to my bank account. I have no worries about it and I trust your judgment. About the wallet, Just send it to my address with our usual bus driver. I will collect it from him on 26th Feb.
Yours truly
Nand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... license, voter ID. Fortunately, I will be not needing them urgently. You will also find some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 3.99541284404 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1195291548 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1997942382 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0666666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122837910949 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386146092013 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390683758459 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820813339535 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360198771751 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.33 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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