More and more people are eating readymade food instead of cooking.
Does advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
There is no doubt that media has a huge impact on people’s life. Some people argue that the involvement of news medium leads to negative growth but I would opine that news does more good than bad in human’s life.
On the one hand, media plays a vital role in providing people with first-hand information when needed. They gather the data from all over the world including, various events and situations which has very crucial part in one’s life, as it helps the citizens to find-out the various problems going-on around the world and act accordingly. Moreover, these facts also help the people in decision-making, which is because when a person is given facts and figures of any event then based on the inputs received they can form opinion and make appropriate decision. For illustration, when an election is held, then the people can know about the electors through the media, as the best source because they show the gist of all the development activities made by each party. Hence, it helps people in taking proper decision. Additionally, sometimes media can acts as a life-saver and can help in preventing any casualties. For example, the Tsunami, swine-flu and now the corona virus, statistics for all these were provided in the news broadcast which in return has helped people to decide and plan their travels and save lives.
On the other hand, sometimes it has been observed that media exaggerates a news which is actually not needed. They try to cover an event and highlight its itinerary which makes no-sense for people to know about it on the first place. Furthermore, the broadcast of these events can divert the people from actual problem that is taking place around, such as poverty, environmental issues, to name a few. For instance, news that showcases activities of a celebrity, such as their marriage, childbirth or even their daily routine to gym or work, has no use to the people rather it acts as a distraction.
In conclusion, despite the fact that media sometimes elaborates some irrelevant information, but they have acted as a guiding medium and a savior too. Overall, the presence of media has been benefiting more than any negative outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67561363384 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.510810578 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926849275458 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368403282096 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367176724634 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712131636794 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408005986515 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.