Some people believe that it is valuable for society to experiment with bacteria and viruses while others feel this is dangerous and should not be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Use examples and explanations from your own knowledge to support your position.
In these modern era, government and pharmaceuticals companies are spent millions of dollars on the microbiology research programmes. Scientists cultivate, identify, and experimenting on microbes such as bacteria, viruses and many more in microbiology programme centre. Many persons believe that it should be banned as it is very dangerous for humanity and other species. However, other people and I believe that these such programmes should be conducted continuously. I will discuss both sides and give my opinion in further ensuring paragraphs.
There are many reasons behind that experimenting on bacteria and viruses should be banned. Firstly, these type of bacterias and viruses can make extremely ill and cause death. Bacteria and viruses spread more as population higher, also very difficult to manage to spread because people cannot see from their naked eyes. It can spread via air, human touch, breathing, water, food and many more. Furthermore, people conduct such an experiment to make bio-weapons, these weapons leads to the extinction of humanity. For example, some researchers believe that infamous coronavirus is man-made, this virus spreading across the globe rapidly, as death is rate 2% from this virus.
On the other hand, conducting research on microbes has many benefits to society. First and foremost, increases the live span of humans. To explain this, in earlier time people were dying from many viruses and bacterial disease like common flu, chickenpox, bronchitis, pneumonia. After the conducting experiment with advanced biology equipment on such microbes’ scientists are able to find vaccines and antibiotics which saves millions of lives every day. For example, recently Thailand microbiologist scientist performed an experiment on virus covid-19 and find out preventive medicine for coronavirus, and saves many lives.
In conclusion, performing experiments on microbes has both beneficial and detrimental results. Many experts and I believe that the overall result of such experiments is positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71475409836 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96760979144 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3902406859 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238727708771 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769430556501 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554155953379 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14402953112 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503905987986 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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