the maps below show the centre of the small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development
The two illustrations interpret the city map and future blueprint if city refinement.
Today's city is located only a stone's throw away to the countryside, but this rural area will vanished, perhaps it will be moved because the city will expand. Furthermore, the main road will be separated into a dual carriageway that provides the access to residential areas.
In the future, there will be two new residential areas; southern and northern ones. The northern ones will be provided with myriad facilities, such as: car parking, mall, and bus station. Furthermore, the southern ones will be close to a spatially alleviated natural garden. The shops will also be emerged into a shopping center, and the old main road will be utilized as a pedestrian access, which is directly connected to the city's features.
in a nutshell, the city will have an immense refinement as a result of the burgeoning population. Therefore, the school will be expanded to support the children's education.
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- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both these views and give your own 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a stone' or simply 'stones'?
Suggestion: a stone; stones
...inement. Todays city is located only a stones throw away to the countryside, but this...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'vanish'
Suggestion: vanish
...e countryside, but this rural area will vanished, perhaps it will be moved because the c...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...tly connected to the citys features. in a nutshell, the city will have an immen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90025534023 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6020783814 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00775771597102 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00490715939281 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0138795427321 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0110411086338 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191237611257 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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