Some people think it is more important for government to send public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illess than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While I accept that spending public resources is vital for enhancing resident’s awareness of health protection from illness I still believe that patients should be supported well to deal with diseases by the government. Personally, I suggest that the prevention and treatment of disease should be equally concerned.
On the one hand, there is a variety of diseases causing by bad behaviors in human daily life so it is necessary for the government to improve their resident’s awareness of a healthy lifestyle. For example, the government can organize some free classes to encourage citizens to keep the quality of sanitation in their houses which helps them avoid infectious diseases. In addition, people should gain insight into the results of a sedentary or smoking lifestyle which will obviously be obesity and lung cancer.
On the other hand, treatment plays a key role in dealing with fatal diseases. As there are many patients who are suffering from life-threatening and they may die if they are not received medical solutions. Also, some types of illnesses have resulted from a polluted environment. In the term of moral responsibilities, everyone has the right to live a happy life but someone cannot be affordable to pay their hospital fee. Therefore, it will be the responsibility of the government to save their citizens’ life by subsidiaries timely.
In conclusion, the government should spend public finance both on providing better healthy lifestyle education and supporting patients suffering from serious diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37190082645 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08168065933 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5838161799 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154516854764 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554293572138 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313637356344 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961510308309 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250743169056 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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