Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
In many countries nowadays, people believe that we should completely get meat out of our diet because it is unnecessary to include meat in a healthy diet. Although I partially agree that people gain many dramatic benefits from a vegetarian diet, I believe that there are still many obstacles to propagate this idea.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why people should be vegetarian. Firstly, meals without meat really help humans’ body prevent many diseases. For example, vegetarian diets typically are low in fat and rich in fiber, which protect people from metabolic disorders like obesity and even heart diseases. Secondly, vegetables really are abundent source of vitamins and minerals. Celery is a good typical example, which is extremely rich in vitamin A, B, C and even minerals like calcium, potassium and zinc, thereby regulating many diseases, especially gout.
On the other hand, although vegetarian diet is really beneficial, we probably confront with many difficult to spread it out. In terms of cultural values, meat plays an important role in many countries’ culture. For instance, beef is main ingredient to cook Pho, which is one of internationally well-known dishes and is usually present in Vienamese cuisine, so getting completely beef Vietnamese diet seems impossible. From the perspective of nutrition, meat is an important source of energy for humans’ bodies which is really hard to replace, and therefore, most people feel lethargic and unable to do anything if they have to eat merely vegetables.
In conclusion, although it is reasonable that being a vegetarian brings many benefits, I think there are some reasons regarding to nutritional balance and cultural values which prevent people from getting rid of meat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31899641577 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82302607852 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2710492834 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187709295825 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661739787341 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588064023684 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110934197189 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572954246206 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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