Nowadays online shopping is so poupular, Discuss the impact on environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it?
Undoubtedly, technicial advancement has euipped denizens with multifarious ameneties which provide great assistance in living a serene life in current scenario.This emerging trend is flourishing by leaps and bounds and enticing more potential buyers. Although this astounding outbreak is alleviating the pollution, it is accountable for retrechment of workers which could not be overlooked.
Even though, electronic commerce is associated with plethora of prejudices but still being preferred by people at large scale. Reason to this is that alot of time can be saved because customers do not have to visit markets physically and receive products at their doorsteps. consequently, there is less traffic congestion and contraction in the quantity of pollution in surroundings.To exemplify, as per the data published by World Health Organisation stating that air pollution consituted due to the emission of carbon from motor vehicle has been marginalised upto certain extented across the globe with the invention of e-buying.Moreover, it is contributing to put check on carbon footprints which is the conceranble issue.
As far as emploment is concerned, e-business is influenicing the work force in detrioting way. In other words, majority of labourer class earn their bread and butter through hard attempts by working over the retailer shops or in shopping complex but the popularity of online shopping snatchs the employment opportunities and leave them idle. It would be biased to overlook the information published by International Labour Organisation depiciting that in Japan citizens are purchasing from online platforms exaggeratly which is inflicting the loss individual jobs . Furthermore, online sites contact manufacturer directly which eliminate the role of wholesellers and salesmen.
In conclusion, this invention is eco-friendly and should be utilised in comparison of other means of shopping but still authoritirs should design other form of job structures for folks in sake of sustaintability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78523489933 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34687205542 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671140939597 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8156300386 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.4 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114422587819 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396285699718 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412477467813 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582186094742 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478270600642 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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